10-23-2006, 10:56 AM
Not bad man. A couple of things I might suggest for next time, and take this with a grain of salt because I'm the furthest thing from a competent photographer.
1) Maybe next time have the bike sitting on another surface besides the sheet that's used as the backdrop. My eyes were instantly drawn to the wrinkles in the third pic from the top.
2) IMO the model is fine, but have her switch up the facial expressions a little. It will add variety and depth to the series of shots. She just doesn't quite give me the "I'm sexy and know it" look that really sets off in my mind most model photoshoots.
3) Maybe use a softer, more natural light if it's available next time. I get the feel like it was shot inside a hospital hallway with tons of phosphorescent lights overhead. It would really help to add some more color to the model and bring out the rich tones in the bike.
Otherwise, they're much better than I could do! Bike looks sharp man =)
1) Maybe next time have the bike sitting on another surface besides the sheet that's used as the backdrop. My eyes were instantly drawn to the wrinkles in the third pic from the top.
2) IMO the model is fine, but have her switch up the facial expressions a little. It will add variety and depth to the series of shots. She just doesn't quite give me the "I'm sexy and know it" look that really sets off in my mind most model photoshoots.
3) Maybe use a softer, more natural light if it's available next time. I get the feel like it was shot inside a hospital hallway with tons of phosphorescent lights overhead. It would really help to add some more color to the model and bring out the rich tones in the bike.
Otherwise, they're much better than I could do! Bike looks sharp man =)
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Past: 2016 GMC Canyon All Terrain Crew Cab / 2010 Jaguar XFR / 2012 Acura RDX AWD Tech / 2008 Cadillac CTS / 2007 Acura TL-S / 1966 5.0 HO Mustang Coupe
2001 Lexus IS300 / 2004 2.8L big turbo WRX STI / 2004 Subaru WRX / A couple of old trucks